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We have been learning to write a poem about summer, using our senses. We were also focusing on using poetic devices such as similes, metaphors and personification in our poem.

That Was Summer!!! As I wake up I hear the sizzle of bacon Like a rabid cat seeking it’s prey, I sit down as see the cooked egg In front of me the yolk bursts in my mouth Like an illegal double happy. That was summer Remember that time the sand was malting lava As I run for the water, Splash a beautiful wave covers me     As another one bowls me flat as if I      Was in a rugby match against the all blacks, That was summer Remember that time we sprinted back to the shop like cheetahs chasing its enemy And then ice-cream melting down my throat That was summer Well I remember when we where the clouds floating over looking at other tiny people as we fly away into the distance that was summer Remember that time our friends and us laughing Our heads off the ball slithering sneakily Through his hands landing out on the full We all laugh like people at a funny as movie That they haven’t seen before That was a GREAT summer!!!