Madison



We have been learning to write a poem about summer, using our senses. We were also focusing on using poetic devices such as similes, metaphors and personification in our poem.

//THAT WAS SUMMER//
== //Remember when the sun was hot, hotter than fire, as if it was melting your skin, like it had melted your ice cream earlier that day.The blazing sun heated up the sand ,making you hop across it. The sand felt like you were standing on a barbecue that was on full heat .that was summer.// == == //Remember that time that you stayed up all night on Christmas eve ,checking the time every ten minutes ,and you ran like a tiger to hunt your prey when your mum said you could open your presents ,and then ripped them open,like you were killing your prey. that was summer .// == == //Remember that day ,that one day with the grey clouds hovering above and the pouring rain which made you stay inside all day watching T.V and drinking hot chocolate which tasted so nice, with the milky chocolate taste swirling in your mouth like a whirl pool dancing around on your taste buds like a butterfly flapping its wings.// ==