Joss

We have been learning to write a poem about summer, using our senses. We were also focusing on using poetic devices such as similes, metaphors and personification in our poem.

SUMMER DO YOU REMEMBER WHAT THE ICE CREAM CONTAINERS LOOKED LIKE SO MANY YUMMY COLOURS TO CHOOSE FROM THAT WAS SUMMER.

DO YOU REMEMBER WHEN THE COKE SOOTHED ON YOURE TASTEBUDS AND SLOWLY CRAWLED DOWN YOUR THROAT THAT WAS SUMMER.

DO YOU REMEMBER WHAT SUMMER SMELT LIKE IT SMELT LIKE CRISPY LEAVES. Do you remember when the sea gulls glided like sky divers stalking prey that was summer. Do you remember how the waves were as big as whales exploded as they hit the shore. i was climbing the tree picked me up as if I was a king.

do you remember on the boat the fish jigging on youre rod like madness. Do you remember at speedway the cars were alaphants crashing and tumbling do you remember mr whippy was like a cheetah speeding down youre street for green that was summer.