Emma

We have been learning to write a poem about summer, using our senses. We were also focusing on using poetic devices such as similes, metaphors and personification in our poem.

Summer do you remember that big crowded beach so crowded from the heat. the ice cream tastes like heaven and it slowly melted down your togs as if it was a snail.

The sausages tastes like a big meal they taste so nice that you have too many so go to bed but it is to hot to sleep and I am noisy.

That was summer.

We walk up the mountain and cows as smelly as trash walk round when we get to the top. All we could feel was sweat on our faces.

That morning when we saw those flat pancakes sizzling away on the pan like sausages the smell was like a dream and they tasted amazing

That was summer

That day sitting at that desk learning maths and outside the rain was a stampede running along the hard ground. The noisy children chatting away over the sound of the rain

No more summer