Rommy

We ahve been learning to write an explanation. Here is my one about why trees are good for us. I am proud of it because I spent a lot of time planning and editing my work.

How do trees help us and the world! Trees are real helpful. So we need to start Looking after them. So read this to find out How to look after trees and what they help us with. This paragraph is about looking after trees. Trees look after us so we need to start looking after them. You can start by not littering or wasting resources just looking after the environment. Don’t chop down trees or pick there leafs. If you need to chop down only trees chop down the dead trees. This paragraph is about keeping trees healthy and standing. You need to water them everyday. Keep the soil moist and damp. Place them in a sunny spot. Try not to put them to close to other plants. Because when trees grow them normally spread out quite far. This paragraph is about what trees provide us   with. Trees are real helpful and can provide us with many things. Such as oxygen. Oxygen is very important and we need it to live. So if we didn’t have any trees. We wouldn’t be able to breathe. So that why we need oxygen, Second thing is fruit and vegetables it’s important. We eat a lot of fruit and vegetables. If we didn’t have trees we wouldn’t have fruit and vegetables. It would be harder to have a balanced diet. Have you heard of five plus a day? Well don’t you think it would be a little hard to have five plus a day if we didn’t have plants that made fruit and vegetables? Third is shade. Shade is really important especially if we didn’t have sun screen. We all know that sunscreen protects us from the Sun, but if we didn’t have sunscreen we would get badly burnt. That’s why we need shade. So make sure you stay under the shade. Lastly there is paper. Paper is useful for many things. E.G: Drawing on, Writing on and making books for us to read. So I hope you remember to take care of the trees. Look after the world because we only have one! By Rommy Askew

We have been learning to write a poem about summer, using our senses. We were also focusing on using poetic devices such as similes, metaphors and personification in our poem.

That was summer Remember that time you sat on the beach you feel the boiling sand coming up against you suddenly your covered in a blanket of sand you walk along the beach the sand sparkling in the sun that was summer

Remember the time you dived into the water it was so cold you ran out up to The top of the beach to get your towel that was summer

Remember the time you where getting the mail Mr whippy stopped right In front of you ran inside to beg your parents for money when you got the Money you ran to Mr whippy to get your ice cream you liked it YUM It started to dribble down your hand the cone onto your hand slowly Down your arm that was summer